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Carter Hall and the Plethora of Prologues
Last night I wore real clothes and ate real food and spoke audibly. Hurrah for me! Today I am still fighting off the remnants of this virus, but I have it on the run, I'm almost sure. I'm going to be taking it easy as much as possible the next few days, because I am warned that this one can get nasty towards the end. No harm to just a bit more tea and reading under the afghan.
The problem with allowing as how Carter can have a prologue if he wants one is...the same problem with writing anything else with Carter, really. He tends to run away with things. So saying, "Arright, boyo, how does it start?" promptly hands me something like five prologues. I find this excessive. I was not convinced that one prologue was not excessive. Still, when I have brain to do it I am writing them all down, in case I need Carter's Church OfBaseball Hockey Speech at some later point, or Carter's Briefing On Janet And Tam, or Carter's (Completely Wrong) Theory of Why the Queen of Air and Darkness Chose Tam To Begin With, or Carter's (Only Slightly Less Wrong) Theory of Why It's Never The Defensemen or like that. All those things will go in their little files, and maybe for once I will have the "bonus materials" sorts of things people talk about. Or not; it's entirely possible that all the rest of that stuff will go somewhere else in the book than the prologue, or in short stories.
But the thing is, mostly when I write things that get cut in later drafts, they are the wrong things. I look at them and say, "No, no, that's not how it happened," like if one of your relatives was telling a story from your trip to Louisiana only you remembered very clearly that it was when you were in Maine instead. And if the things actually happened and need cutting and redoing, it's because I wrote them badly. So I almost never come out of this whole process (at least so far) with material that is substantially correct as written but does not belong in the final draft. Maybe Carter will do that for me. We'll see.
I am also trying to keep him very thoroughly away from the words "else the Puck a liar call," because I am a bit scared of what will happen if someone lets him at them. And since he, y'know, doesn't exist, someone would have to be me. So. ("Like hell all is mended," says Carter in my head. "Think but this my ass.")
Also, the Wild won, and Cal was back on the ice, and do we regard this as a coincidence? We do not.
The problem with allowing as how Carter can have a prologue if he wants one is...the same problem with writing anything else with Carter, really. He tends to run away with things. So saying, "Arright, boyo, how does it start?" promptly hands me something like five prologues. I find this excessive. I was not convinced that one prologue was not excessive. Still, when I have brain to do it I am writing them all down, in case I need Carter's Church Of
But the thing is, mostly when I write things that get cut in later drafts, they are the wrong things. I look at them and say, "No, no, that's not how it happened," like if one of your relatives was telling a story from your trip to Louisiana only you remembered very clearly that it was when you were in Maine instead. And if the things actually happened and need cutting and redoing, it's because I wrote them badly. So I almost never come out of this whole process (at least so far) with material that is substantially correct as written but does not belong in the final draft. Maybe Carter will do that for me. We'll see.
I am also trying to keep him very thoroughly away from the words "else the Puck a liar call," because I am a bit scared of what will happen if someone lets him at them. And since he, y'know, doesn't exist, someone would have to be me. So. ("Like hell all is mended," says Carter in my head. "Think but this my ass.")
Also, the Wild won, and Cal was back on the ice, and do we regard this as a coincidence? We do not.
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I'm glad you're feeling better. This disease gig is for the birds.
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I did a double take on "else the Puck a liar call," because, y'know, hockey.
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*glee* at report of more Carter-wrangling.
*Much* power of dark fruits going on in this corner of the world, btw, what with much fruit and darkness everywhere (sundown being around 5 pm and dinner being more like around 8 pm, some wandering around in the dark is inevitable).
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The juice stores here sell pre-chopped coconut shards and packets of pomegranate seeds. Very convenient - especially when one happens to be sharing a bathroom/kitchen with the guesthouse managers and does not want to use up a disproportionate number of napkins or towels....
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Blackbird Cafe makes a bread pudding with apples and caramel that is really quite fine. Really quite.
Coconut shards are never any use to me, but I'm glad they're of use to somebody.
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There has been a lack of something in my life lately, and I think that apple crisp might at least help with it. Thank you.
(Why, yes, I realize that was entirely random.)
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That Carter! What can you do with that boy? Or, as we say around here, "Bless his heart, he does go on, doesn't he?"
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