Children's story

[mrissa]

"Big Sister". By me. For your reading pleasure. Or not, if you don't feel like it.

(There is no r in my last name, though. I hope they fix that bit soon.)

Comments

Nice!

[toolittletime.livejournal.com]

Very nice story - I could've used it a double-digit number of years ago.

BTW - When they remove the R it looks like they could use a space in your bio also - tobuy

[cooperati.livejournal.com]

that was a nice, fun, rounded tale. you were as indepth with the characters as the situation demanded. god i'll never understand the ability to scale characters to the story, which you evidently have.

there's no r in your last name? i thought it was silent and invisible. like, just assumed that if someone wanted to misspell lingen there would be an r. lol.

-t-

[merriehaskell.livejournal.com]

I also noted there was a paragraph formatting problem half-way through the story. Hm...

Fortunately, it didn't distract me (much) from the pleasure of reading it. I liked this a lot--you were very right to keep the faith on this one!

[mrissa.livejournal.com]

Actually, it didn't require much faith-keeping: there aren't that many children's/YA markets out there. This was not one of the longer ones.

But I'm glad it found a home, too, and I'm glad you liked it.

[careswen.livejournal.com]

It looks like they fixed your name.

Nice story! I was the pesky younger sibling in my family, so your tale made me smile.