>> Seriously, this is well-written on the sentence level.
In the future, I really hope no one ever has to defend something I wrote by breaking out this sentence.
(But yes, this was a valuable distinction for the work you were reviewing.)
>> Also, the very ending felt tacked-on and weird to me. Particularly the characters who turned out to get married when they were grown up: seriously, was this written by a group of 12-year-old girls?
I think I just learned one of the rules of writing a decent epilogue.
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Date: 2009-02-26 02:49 am (UTC)In the future, I really hope no one ever has to defend something I wrote by breaking out this sentence.
(But yes, this was a valuable distinction for the work you were reviewing.)
>> Also, the very ending felt tacked-on and weird to me. Particularly the characters who turned out to get married when they were grown up: seriously, was this written by a group of 12-year-old girls?
I think I just learned one of the rules of writing a decent epilogue.