Books read, early February
Feb. 16th, 2008 08:07 amJohn Barnes, The Merchants of Souls. I read this one accidentally out of order, and the fourth one is looking worse thereby: this is not the bridge I thought would have to happen between the second book and the fourth book. So there is no such bridge. So -- um. The fourth book is looking a lot more disjointed now.
Darryl Brock, If I Never Get Back. Baseball time travel novel. The main character doesn't think about anything but himself, ever, throughout the book. This never comes back to bite him in the butt. He tells people things that would prove untrue in their timeline, if not in his, and no one seems to notice or call him on it, even with ample opportunity to spot discrepancies between his story and reality. When they went to San Francisco, I thought, ah, here it all comes crashing down on his head, because he said he was from San Francisco and doesn't know anything he should about it and has no friends or acquaintances there. But no, what happened was misty angst and continuing tacked-on Fenians. Great. Also he thinks nothing of having unprotected sex with a woman in 1869, because tra la la, they really love each other. So when he disappears back into the future and may well have left her pregnant, with huge social and economic consequences, well, at least they really love each other! What a jerk. Books about jerks can be okay, I guess, but this was a book about a stupid jerk, plus a bunch of oblivious stupid people around him. Some of them also jerks. Harumph harumph harumph. (Worst of all, it wasn't bad enough for me to quit in the middle, and it wasn't good enough for me to actually enjoy it.)
Charles de Lint, Promises to Keep. This is a Jilly Coppercorn story, so you don't have to have the feeling that everyone in Newford does the same things and likes the same things, because it's not a new component of everyone, it's Jilly. It's filling in some backstory rather than going forward with her, and since the gaps in her back story are not that large, it ends up being rather slight for its length. Not an "it was only a dream" ending, but not far enough from it for my taste.
Diane Duane, The Door Into Shadow. Better than The Door Into Fire; clearly the work of a few more years of experience. I wanted more fire elemental, but what're ya gonna do.
Joe Haldeman, The Accidental Time Machine. This time traveler thinks about stuff other than himself. Which is good, because there's not much to the book but him thinking about stuff, really. Do you want a classic-style "snapshots of possible futures as the time traveler hops along" book? This is that. It's not more than that. It's also not less.
Sandra McDonald, The Outback Stars. When the central relationship in a book is a romantic one and you totally don't buy the romantic relationship in any way, it sort of cuts down on your enjoyment of a book.
Karl Meyer and Shareen Brysac, Tournament of Shadows: the Great Game and the Race for Empire in Asia. Fascinating stuff about Central Asian history as influenced by Europeans; if you want the focus to be on what the people who actually lived there were doing, you need a different book. Moved right along, for all that it was a great big brick of a book. I was pleased and amused to see standard adventure novel tricks go badly awry in real life: did you know, for example, that a great big Englishman with brown dye on his skin does not actually look like your average Tibetan? That he might stand out somehow? That they might look at him and say, "Oh, look, it's some big white dude with walnut juice all over his face," rather than, "Hey, Lobsang, that must be your cousin Dorjee, who is totally from around here!"? I was just so pleased at that not working.
Kim Stanley Robinson, Forty Signs of Rain. Okay, I give. I'm reading Kim Stanley Robinson again. I really, really, really didn't like The Years of Rice and Salt (I want to read about people, not types), and The Martians rubbed me completely the wrong way as well, and I was thinking I was done. And then
rysmiel was talking about these, and they were out in paperback, so I got the first one. So. It wasn't Green Mars, but I think it was at least Red Mars level. It was the stuff I used to read Kim Stanley Robinson for in the first place: he is so very earnest, and you never have to stop and scowl and say, "No scientist ever said something like that." Or even, "No bureaucrat ever said something like that." Also he is very good with weather, and that's very very necessary in this book. So. I'll get the other two in this series, and if you liked the Mars trilogy but not as much his stuff since, maybe you should, too.
Darryl Brock, If I Never Get Back. Baseball time travel novel. The main character doesn't think about anything but himself, ever, throughout the book. This never comes back to bite him in the butt. He tells people things that would prove untrue in their timeline, if not in his, and no one seems to notice or call him on it, even with ample opportunity to spot discrepancies between his story and reality. When they went to San Francisco, I thought, ah, here it all comes crashing down on his head, because he said he was from San Francisco and doesn't know anything he should about it and has no friends or acquaintances there. But no, what happened was misty angst and continuing tacked-on Fenians. Great. Also he thinks nothing of having unprotected sex with a woman in 1869, because tra la la, they really love each other. So when he disappears back into the future and may well have left her pregnant, with huge social and economic consequences, well, at least they really love each other! What a jerk. Books about jerks can be okay, I guess, but this was a book about a stupid jerk, plus a bunch of oblivious stupid people around him. Some of them also jerks. Harumph harumph harumph. (Worst of all, it wasn't bad enough for me to quit in the middle, and it wasn't good enough for me to actually enjoy it.)
Charles de Lint, Promises to Keep. This is a Jilly Coppercorn story, so you don't have to have the feeling that everyone in Newford does the same things and likes the same things, because it's not a new component of everyone, it's Jilly. It's filling in some backstory rather than going forward with her, and since the gaps in her back story are not that large, it ends up being rather slight for its length. Not an "it was only a dream" ending, but not far enough from it for my taste.
Diane Duane, The Door Into Shadow. Better than The Door Into Fire; clearly the work of a few more years of experience. I wanted more fire elemental, but what're ya gonna do.
Joe Haldeman, The Accidental Time Machine. This time traveler thinks about stuff other than himself. Which is good, because there's not much to the book but him thinking about stuff, really. Do you want a classic-style "snapshots of possible futures as the time traveler hops along" book? This is that. It's not more than that. It's also not less.
Sandra McDonald, The Outback Stars. When the central relationship in a book is a romantic one and you totally don't buy the romantic relationship in any way, it sort of cuts down on your enjoyment of a book.
Karl Meyer and Shareen Brysac, Tournament of Shadows: the Great Game and the Race for Empire in Asia. Fascinating stuff about Central Asian history as influenced by Europeans; if you want the focus to be on what the people who actually lived there were doing, you need a different book. Moved right along, for all that it was a great big brick of a book. I was pleased and amused to see standard adventure novel tricks go badly awry in real life: did you know, for example, that a great big Englishman with brown dye on his skin does not actually look like your average Tibetan? That he might stand out somehow? That they might look at him and say, "Oh, look, it's some big white dude with walnut juice all over his face," rather than, "Hey, Lobsang, that must be your cousin Dorjee, who is totally from around here!"? I was just so pleased at that not working.
Kim Stanley Robinson, Forty Signs of Rain. Okay, I give. I'm reading Kim Stanley Robinson again. I really, really, really didn't like The Years of Rice and Salt (I want to read about people, not types), and The Martians rubbed me completely the wrong way as well, and I was thinking I was done. And then
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Date: 2008-02-16 02:17 pm (UTC)I suspect he and Roger Zelazny's Black are the reasons I keep putting Sociopathic Ponies Of Dubious Provenance in things.
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Date: 2008-02-16 03:12 pm (UTC)Band name. *calls it*
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Date: 2008-02-16 03:20 pm (UTC)Sociopathic Ponies, Of Dubious Provenance
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Date: 2008-02-17 07:54 am (UTC)spoiler
"And then there's the marriage between two women, four men, a pregnant male dragon and a fire elemental who is sometimes a young man, young woman, stallion or plain ball of fire. Not only not heteronormative, but also not dualistic or speciesist, so it's definitely queer. ...apart from the fact that it is happening in a setting where none of this is looked upon as hugely weird and objectionable."
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I still want to read Door into Starlight when she eventually finishes it. This is one of the few story settings with deities who I find sensible. Among non-utopian society building, this set is pretty much my favourite.
I think that I feel an icon coming.
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Date: 2008-02-17 12:14 pm (UTC)And I think the deities are exactly it. I think that Duane has done a good enough job making the humans in this book the children of their gods that there are all sorts of things I don't have to consider a general opinion of human nature in this world. The human relationship with the gods in this book affects everything including sexuality (which makes sense with gods who make no secret of actually showing up in people's lives), and it can be part of the speculative conceit successfully.
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Date: 2008-02-16 03:00 pm (UTC)I think my problem is that my mind goes off on associational tracks, whether for writing or life. I think if someone told me I could live forever ("Steve, you just won the Superbowl. What are you going to do?") I'd say I was glad because then I could read everything.
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Date: 2008-02-16 06:52 pm (UTC)Just how deeply and closely does one read? Is what one reads really worth reading deeply and closely? Maybe that's it!
When I read sentences like:
'Everything went well at first - so well that it lulled them. At nine different locations around the house - nine is three cubed and hence a very powerful number in white magic -'
The crudity of such info dumping maddens me so much: that it got past an agent and an editor like that to publication, I fume my way through the rest of a chapter and it takes an aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaage.
Perhaps I'm just to OCD to read swiftly and thoroughly enough!
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Date: 2008-02-16 09:14 pm (UTC)But I think people just have different processing speeds as well. My natural reading speed is very fast -- I don't skim or do any of the other tricks they teach in speed reading courses. I also type fast and think fast, comparatively speaking.
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Date: 2008-02-17 04:17 am (UTC)Having read a number of Tom Clancy's book (back when he was still writing his own books), I'm familiar with this style of writing, and so long as I feel confident that events eventually will build into a story, I'm content to wait, especially since I'm enjoying the setting and the characters and the infodumps.
I haven't read the Mars trilogy, though it's been on my mental "to read" list for years. If I like this trilogy, that will probably push it further up the list.
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Date: 2008-02-16 09:28 pm (UTC)It does seem a tad silly to review books when writing. So much white noise, for one thing.
There are books which may be called novels and there are books which are story machines. And in story machines there is info-dumping galore. I'm not sure I could write a story machine if I tried. That must be where I am going wrong! And I do read them from time to time.
I think I just try too hard to make every sentence count! It is clear to me that in some of the books out there, even those published by the big publishing houses, this is simply not so.
Surely every sentence ought to count, even in a novel? And to do things in certain ways, like the above example of info-dumping, is an aberration that should not be allowed to stand, to convey information in that way. It's a novel, not a cornflake packet. The author ought not to allow it to stand in the first place, surely?! Never mind another pair of eyes getting to look at it. I am calm...I am calm...!
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Date: 2008-02-16 11:46 pm (UTC)There is plenty of room for taste to vary. I don't expect you to enjoy everything all of my friends have written -- I certainly don't. But when you decide that the problem is that other people are not trying as hard with as superior a set of standards as you are, maybe it's time to go back and do the math again.
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Date: 2008-02-17 12:45 am (UTC)If the reader takes the time to read it the writer ought to take the time to write it. Palpably a load of dross gets through. Every time someone gets into a car in The Da Vinci Code the car is 'gunned' across the road. It just isn't good enough, not for that, not for a Pulitzer contender, or whatever it may be.
When somebody has to stop in the middle of a narrative to dump some information it's just bad art, whoever does it.
There is too much out there with too little care in it. I am not suggesting it is any of your friends! With the explosion of the Net and e-zines this has increased exponentially.
It isn't all relative and great fiction is not merely down to what you or I like or gain purely recreational enjoyment from. That is the death of culture and of a developing canon. As is relativism. There is a common sense informed consensus of criteria that can be reached on judging what is good or bad writing, whatever its intention.
I am invested in genre, in fantasy, passionately, and it is my perception and ongoing informed observation that it is too easy on itself, too easy by far. I am of course not the standard bearer or saviour of it, no more than are you.
You have a diamond-bright intellect, I have observed it, but I will not offend you by observing it any more! You have no requirement to host me on your space, either virtually or otherwise. There was no intention to offend.
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Date: 2008-02-17 07:32 am (UTC)I know, not entirely in good taste.
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Date: 2008-02-17 01:16 am (UTC)Talking to someone you have "met" via the net -- and whose bibliography includes a great many e-zine publications -- about the evils of the net and e-zines allowing people who don't meet your standards to speak is really extremely silly. The only kinds of canon that are threatened by diverse voices are the kind that need threatening. Silence is not the answer, and there is a huge difference between saying, "This book is no good and I can't recommend that you read it," and, "This book is no good and no one should have ever permitted it to be published."
I couldn't read past the prologue of The DaVinci Code because of the prose, but I still think it has things to teach us -- and not just that the masses will accept crap, either.
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Date: 2008-02-18 03:37 am (UTC)Not every reader is you. Not every reader picks up on the same things you do. Not every reader reads with the same genre expectations and assumptions as you do.
Not every reader thinks it's an infodump. Some think the information is presented logically, as part of the story. Some think it's out of place and horribly done.
Not every reader thinks the information is seamlessly integrated into the story. Some don't realized it's there and feel like the author is tricking them, pointing and laughing. Some think it's presented perfectly, so it doesn't kick them out of the narrative.
Any or all of these may apply to the same sentence, depending on the reader at that moment.
Most of the time, if someone says, "Here is Art! And here is crap!" they are being rude. More so if they are speaking to someone who may dabble in what is pointed to as the second, and even more so if they do it in said someone's living room.